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    what's wrong with my website???

    Hi guys ....

    I have created my own website and I try to update it constantly....

    I would appreciate if you guys could check it out and tell my as a client what needs to change

    www.cctvdurban.co.za

    I know I can read tons of media telling me what to do to make my site more effective
    but I prefer a individuals opinion.

    thanks

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    1. We are a team that assists you with you(r) technology requirements. missing r on one of the yous.

    I think your write up on the about page needs to be longer and use more key words for the service and product you offer. You can google the service you offer and see what the top ranking sites are doing and get hints from. The over all lay out is good.

    Also add site to google http://www.google.com/submityourcontent/

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    Hi Keitho - I have had a look. Seems simple, clean and straightforward at this time. Your map on the contact us page shows you as just outside Vosburg, but you have Durban telephone number???

    I appreciate the fact that you put the prices in, as it immediately gives the viewer an idea of the price range of the products.

    Vieome has already pointed out the "r" missing in the first line.

    "We are all you need for your technology requirements" does not sit well with me as a consumer as it smacks of self-aggrandisement. As someone once used to say "Self praise is no recommendation".
    An education isn't how much you have committed to memory, or even how much you know. It's being able to differentiate between what you do know and what you don't. - Anatole France

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    Spelling problems in the main, I think. I saw "rocoding" on the product page - there might be more.

    Overall, pretty clean and functional though (especially if this is a first attempt).
    The trouble with opportunity is it normally comes dressed up as work.

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    Congrats if you manage to rank that. I've never seen something made with a system like Woza Online rank well.

    You need a whole lot more content to begin with and the grammar needs work. You'd be better off figuring out how to use Wordpress and putting up a proper website using that.

    Perhaps look into starting a blog giving people useful CCTV/Computer related advice?
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    thanks guys
    I really appreciate the replies
    And yes I have horrid spelling!!!!!

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